Sight Book 1, 2

Rinna and Kren make their appearances! Some of you may recognize Rinna from this: [link]

I literally thought up Kren's design as I was drawing this. WHAT

Okay, I don't know why, but I think the scanner did something weird to the color. Which won't be much of a problem from now on, because this is the last color page (for this volume, anyway). I'm sorry, but I don't think I could survive another 98 pages of this. Or the last 18 in this chapter, for that matter.

Speaking of color, guess what? I can't draw steam. Or smoke. Or fire. ARG.

I have no idea what that animal in the last panel is. It, like Kren, was made up at the last second.

So anyway, let me know what you think! I'm not as happy with this page as with the first, but bleh.

Edit: Fixed the weird color thing. Rinna's skin looks a bit off to me, but at least they don't have reverse-raccoon eyes.

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